Walt: Write an exposition
I strongly belief that there should be no class captain at NBC.
I think that after you have read this then you will agree.
If someone didn't get picked and they really wanted this opertunity they might feel left out and that not much people like them.
How would you feel if you lost the election by one vote.
My second reason is that if you got picked then there could become a lot of stress and pressure on you. I don't think having stress and pressure I going to help when you have to study and consintrate on your work.
My final reason is that what is the between a teacher and a class captain. There both telling you what to do and then you might get sick of having almost two teachers in the room. So there almost doing the same stuff.
So for these reasons I strongly believe that we should not have class captain and I am sure you agree.
Bye Giorgio
Hi Giorgio,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this exposition and agree with it.
maybe next time you could cheek your spelling.
Hayley, why do you agree with it? What specifically do you agree with? Good constructive feedback on spelling.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing.
Giorgio,
Make sure you check your spelling before posting, check out the spelling of 'opportunity' and 'concentrate'. Good job.